tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6974207119137509719.post6807307795958757392..comments2013-06-07T23:48:07.842-04:00Comments on 409 for Thought: Malthus ParagraphAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00331030883371371862noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6974207119137509719.post-11588445670816176122012-09-14T11:41:52.561-04:002012-09-14T11:41:52.561-04:00Great job. The evidence and great analysis combine...Great job. The evidence and great analysis combine to form a great paragraphAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06821378589316627615noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6974207119137509719.post-29518094935981779702012-09-14T11:41:34.178-04:002012-09-14T11:41:34.178-04:00Great job explaining the dynamic between the rich ...Great job explaining the dynamic between the rich and the poor. Try portraying Malthus's ideas about the population checks.Bahar Sheikhinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6974207119137509719.post-53243287561232769012012-09-14T11:40:52.357-04:002012-09-14T11:40:52.357-04:00Awesome use of a direct quote, it reflects the con...Awesome use of a direct quote, it reflects the condition of the poor very well and supports your main points! Try to incorporate a little about population checks even though it isn't in your thesis, but you could always add it if you wanted.<br />Summer S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16055381066373695828noreply@blogger.com