Tyler Jung
Purple
10/31/12
10/31/12
This term,
I have demonstrated the growth mindset during the first writing workshop. We
were supposed to write, and peer edit the theses and body paragraph’s of our
classmates. The body paragraph and thesis was about the industrial revolution.
I definitely received some positive feedback, from both my peers and you (Ms.
Shapero). Most of the feedback revolved
on the relevance of my thesis and the analysis in my body paragraphs. I took the feedback into serious
consideration, as I know that in the past I have had difficulties with writing
theses and analysis. I demonstrated the
growth mindset by not giving up on my writing! I’ve been making similar
mistakes since the beginning of 9th grade, yet I have improved
TREMENDOUSLY, although I’m far from a perfect writer. I will continue to work
on this, and hopefully by the end of the year, I’ll improve even more! This
mindset improved my learning, because instead of giving up on my writing, I am
and will continue to try to improve on it as the year progresses.
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