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Population control is necessary through natural and manmade efforts in order to sustain/stabilize a food supply and prevent poverty because those whom are poor cannot afford or be accountable for their children. In Malthus's argument he makes it clear that one could not afford having kids in the life they had chosen but also should not accuse society for their inability to pay for their kids. Meaning that people must take full responsibility for the position they have put themselves in. When writing about poverty and food supply Malthus says "... He accuses the partial and institutions of society... The last person he would think is to accuse himself" (reader p.99). Most people jump to blaming others because they do not want to take the responsibility for their actions especially when it has to do with something so drastic. Although society can influence, it cannot be the sole reason to blame for situations like so. With over population there becomes a greater need for food; food cannot be produced as quickly and easily as human beings can, there for the supply of food will not be sufficient. In order to control this Malthus believes that there is a need for population checks whether it is man made or not.

Malthus, Ron

Population checks must be implicated in order to sustain a society that can not outgrow it's food supply and issues regarding insuffiencent amounts of food and poverty are one's own problem. If the population gets too large, then there will not be enough food for everyone which will result in starvation and a large, struggling lower class. If there are population checks, then there will not be the problem of too many poor people who are suffering from starvation. In addition, since the idea of population checks have been enforced yet, the people who do endure lack of financial stability and an inadequate amount of food are to blame themselves. They are aware of their economical situation yet choose to reproduce anyways, despite the fact that they have nothing to support their offspring with. What will help support and maintain a steady number is positive and preventive checks. Positive checks are natural whilst the preventive checks are something controlled to keep the population at a regular number.

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Man has the power to control the population and food through preventive checks, balancing the birth rate brought on by the poor blaming the upper class and not taking the responsibility for their poverty which causes inequality between between the number of people and the amount of food. The poor's poverty increases as they have more kids and they can't maintain that many kids so they blame the upper class . yet the poor still have more children so that creates a unequal balance in the population and food. With preventitive checks though you can balance the population and food by knowing the amount of people.   

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Neil Cooper

Population checks must be implemented in order to sustain a society that cannot outgrow its food supply and issues regarding insufficient amounts of food and poverty is ones own problems. Malthus states, "by law of our nature which makes necessary to the life of man, the effects of these unequal powers must be kept equal."  Since these powers must be kept equal, Malthus believes that the population must stay lower than the food supply so everyone has enough food.  To keep the population balanced, Malthus states that, "This implies a strong and constantly operating check on population from the difficulty of subsistence."  This implies that when people have little food to get by the population will be checked to prevent over population and without this the population would exceed the food supply.  Malthus then states that if people suffer from a lack of food then it is their fault.  He believes that it is their fault for having too many children when they cannot afford them.  He says "Man cannot look around him and see the distress which frequently presses upon those who have large families."  What he is saying is that if man could see the hardship people with large families endure because they have too little food, then they would have smaller families, thus keeping the population in check.

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While a large population gives factories for more employees, it causes the food supply to run low, therefore causing positive and preventative checks to be necessary in order to prevent the poor from over populating and blaming the government. The positive check is when a natural disaster occurs, killing a large amount of people. Malthus views this as a positive event, because he believes these disasters are natures' way of restoring the food to people ratio to be back in order. Since Malthus believes in this idea, he doesn't come off as a very compassionate or sympathetic guy. He blames the poor for the lack of food and overpopulation. This is because despite the poor not having a lot of food, they continue to reproduce. If one can't provide enough food for themselves, they shouldn't have more kids, because then they would have to feed more mouths! Instead of the poor taking credit for their part in the famines, they blame the government. Malthus disagrees with the poor on that matter. He may have not been in the lower class, but he was well aware of their dilemmas, and saw the solution. It was a single solution that would solve the whole nation's problem! If there isn't enough food for the amount of people in a nation, then they should stop reproducing and let the food growth rate catch up to the human growth rate!

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Population control is necessary through natural and man-control checks in order to stabilize food supply because the poor reproduces more than they can manage. The man-control checks consisted of decreasing of food supply and the amount of children in families. Thomas R. Malthus's idea of controlling population because he believed the more people there are, the food there is. The food supply could never be lower than the population. As an example if the population and the food supply was not stable that meant that there would be an decrease of population. Thomas explained that there were wars, plagues epidemics and disease that kept the population together. Lastly Malthus also argued that the poor accuses government, rich, and society by not having enough money to care for their numerous amounts of children.

In the writing "On the Principle of Population" by Thomas R. Malthus, Malthus shares his thoughts on his dislike of population growth and ways to limit it. Population control is necessary through natural and man controlled checks in order to stabilize food supply all because the poor reproduces more than they can manage. THe first point made by Malthus was that "food is necessary to the existence of man" and the more people in a designated area, the less food supply there will be. Because of increased population, the food increases at a slower rate than the population leaving people with not enough food. If the population is controlled, food scarcity should not be a problem. A way to help limit the population in order to have enough food is through checks. THere are two different types of checks, positive and preventative. Positive checks are natural and help expose the population to bad atmospheres to shorten their life. Preventative checks are man-controlled and they help prevent large families through the idea that one man has to support his whole family. By avoiding have several offspring, the small families can enjoy their lives more thoroughly knowing they have a lower chance in poverty. Overall Malthus mainly focuses on the poor because he believes they are the main cause of over population. He believes that the poor accuses "the society in which they live and the government" for all their financial issues however in reality, their poverty is their own fault because they over-produce, not being able to afford the amount of offspring they have. Because of the poor reproducing more that they can handle, population control through stabilizing food supply and positive and preventative checks is essential.

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  Malthus believed that the growing population of the world would one day exceed the natural and man-made resources needed to maintain life.  Worried about this issue, Malthus created a list that stated strong assumptions a society should follow.  Malthus also understood the idea that the population should be checked, and that an unchecked society would grow a population to big to handle.  He also agreed with the idea that the supply and abundance of food should be kept equal, because of the high population and with food a necessary part of life, everything should be equal.  Malthus also uses the population to check death rate in the society, helping keep track of the population as it either is decreasing or increasing.  Lastly, Malthus considers that the population mixed with poverty leads to difference in workers wages, parishes, and rich verses poor in the society.  There is no up side to a decrease in population or increase, with a higher population comes more workers for factories, but a shorter supply of food for the workers and their families.  These checks help by preventing the lower class from over populating and having the population criticize the government. 

Man has the power to control the population through preventative check, balancing the birth rate brought on by the poor blaming the upper class and not taking responsibility for their choices, causing an increase of poverty. Malthus believed that the way to control population and hunger was to prevent overpopulation to occur, he would do this using preventative check, where he would make a limit to the amount of offspring that each family could produce in order to keep poverty and crime to a minimum. He believed that there was a connection between poverty and population that as population increased, so did poverty and hunger because the amount of food didn't change, but as the population increased, the food had to be distributed to more people. to try and prevent poverty, overpopulation and hunger, Malthus proposed a child limit, to increase the amount of food received by citizens.

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          While a large population gives factories more employees, it causes the food supply to run low, therefore causing positive and preventative checks to be necessary in order to prevent the poor from overpopulating and blaming the government. Large populations are beneficial for factories because there will be many people doing labor and large numbers help make mass production possible. However, the population will eventually outgrow the resources that are needed to sustain it, resulting in a need for positive checks such as natural disasters to keep the poor from over-increasing the population. Also, as Thomas R. Malthus suggests, poor people themselves are the cause of their own poverty, yet are blaming the government for bad living conditions and scarce food. Using positive and preventative checks will benefit the human race in the future by helping balance the amount of food available with the population.

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Population checks must be implemented in order to sustain a society, which cannot grow larger than its food supply, and issues regarding insufficient amounts of food, and, poverty, are one’s own problem.  As Malthus said, “Population, when unchecked, increases in a geometrical ratio. Subsistence only increases in an arithmetical ratio.” (97). Meaning that population (overtime) will outgrow the natural rate that that its food supply grows, leaving a large percent of man living in a state of famine. Malthus believes that one reason for this is that man cannot look around and see poverty increasing around him; and that poverty seeks those with large families more often. This is because man can’t calculate the amount each unnecessary element and possession is worth in and to his life. But if man could, he would be able to get rid of things he doesn’t need to make a better life for his family. “When the wages of labour are hardly sufficient to maintain two a man marries and have 5 or 6. He of course finds himself miserably distressed” (99).  –Jelani Narcisse (Blue Block)

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Malthus thinks that population will forever outgrow the resources needed to sustain life, therefore creates a list of strong, constructive principles society should follow. Malthus believes that population should be checked , and unchecked population increases in a geometrical ration, while subsistence only in an arithmetical ratio. Therefore, food, which is necessary for survival should be kept equally distributed. Also, Malthus considers positive checks of population, death by society to be a natural form of limiting the population. Lastly, Malthus is certain that population and poverty mixed leads to accusations of wages, parishes, rich and un-justs of society because one cannot provide for his family. While a large population gives factories more employees, it causes the food supply to run low, therefore causing positive and preventive checks to be necessary, in order to prevent the poor from overpopulating and blaming the government.  
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       While a large population gives factories more employees, it causes the food supply to run low, therefore causing positive checks to be necessary, in order to prevent the poor from over population and blaming the government. Malthus states that positive checks are needed to make sure there is enough food for the people. Malthus says there are "two powers of population and productions in the earth, and that great law of our nature which must constantly keep their efforts equal..." he believes people should limit the amount of children they have so there "is power in the earth to produce subsistence for man". People should limit the amount of children that have so there is at least enough food for everyone to survive. There were issues with the poor over populating and complaining about lack of food. Malthus states if they were to listen and to have less children then they would have more food because there would be less mouths to feed. In addition to this, Malthus also relied on the positive checks, natural disasters are one example of a positive check. He believed that natural checks were natures way of making sure the population did not exceed the food production. Overall, Malthus believed people needed to control the population and that positive check also maintained the population so that the population did not exceed the food production.
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Population control is necessary through natural and man-controlled checks in order to stabilize food supply because the poor reproduces more than they can manage. Natural checks include poverty, epidemics, and warfare. These all work towards keeping the population down, which would allow everyone a stable amount of food. Preventative checks include man's superior mindset which does not allow man, specifically the poor, to realize that his financial state cannot support many children. However, the poor continually breeds. Food grows at a slower rate than population, and this supply is bound to run out if the poor continues to breed. Additionally, the poor blames society and government when it is themselves they should blame for not maintaining the balance between food supply and population.

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Charlie Bolton

In order for society to survive, the poor must execute preventative population checks, so that the food supply can be sustained. Preventative checks must be executed because the population is growing at a faster rate than the food supply, causing for there to be a shortage of food.  The reason why the poor must execute these check is because they are breeding to fast, and having offspring, which they cannot provide for, causing for them to complain to the government about not being able to help them. It is actually their fault that they cannot provide for their families, because they can barley provide for themselves and their wives with one child, but they go ahead and have more offspring. So in order for the population to grow in better alignment with the food growth, the poor must execute preventative checks on their population growth, because it is their fault for this uneven growth of food and population.

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While a large population gives factories more employees, it causes the food supply to run low, therefore causing positive checks to be necessary in order to prevent the poor from overpopulating and blaming the government.  In order for society to thrive, the population must be higher than the amount of food.  However, population increases at an exponential rate, and food increases at a fixed rate.  This means that eventually population will surpass food, and people will starve.  To slow population growth, there are two kinds of checks.  There are positive checks, which are natural disasters, and preventative checks, which rely on human judgement.  When the poor blame the government and the aristocracy for their poverty, they do not realize that the true cause of their poverty is their fault.  When a family’s income would only be able to support one or two children, the go ahead and have seven children. They then blame others for their own mistakes.

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Man has the power to control the population and food through preventative checks balancing the birth rate brought on by the poor blaming the rich, therefore not taking responsibility for their poverty, which causes an inequality between the number of people and the food. I think that Malthus’s big point is that people need to control the amount of kids that they are having because it obviously affects the population number. Therefore, if the population becomes too much for the food supply to handle everyone doesn’t get the food that they need. He begins to speak of ways to control this ever-rising population by using preventative check being natural or government decisions. He almost promotes the natural disasters to lower the population but leans more towards the idea of having people control the amount of children they give birth to. But then the problem arises as to the poor complaining that they are not receiving enough food to keep their families alive. Malthus comes back with the argument that if they had listened and kept the amount of kids they had down then they wouldn’t have a problem at all. His big goal is to balance out the population with the food to satisfy everyone and keep the problems to a minimum. 

-Peter Hereu

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            Population Control is necessary by natural and man controlled checks in order to stabilize food supply because the poor produces more than they can manage. When Malthus lists his concerns on overpopulation, he specifically connects population to poverty. The poor people of the world blame the rich for taking more than they can handle, when really it’s the poor who are taking more than the needed amount. The poor overproduce children and therefore they don’t have enough food for their family. This is because their wages are very low. The solution to prevent these food shortages is through population control.  Food grows slower than people, therefore it is the population that needs to be watched, not the food. The poor also need to take the responsibility and the consequences of their poor decisions (poor decisions being having too many kids).  The poor needs to use preventative checks to limit the population and stabilize food supply.

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                                                Steven Sampson

In order for a society to survive, the poor must execute preventative population checks so that the food supply will be sustained. These preventative population checks are ways that man control the population to a point at which food supply is sufficient enough for a society to be able to function properly. These preventative population checks consist of abstinence or limiting the amount of children per family. This method of controlling the population is necessary because food supply is a linear growth while population growth is exponential, therefore the population must be controlled enough so that there is enough food. Also, another reason that Malthus argues that checks are necessary is because without them the poor will continue to grow in size due to their low incomes and high costs to support a large family. With these checks on the poor, Malthus believes this will solve the problem of ever having an insufficient amount of food or resources to support the society.