Graham Nadel
Malthus
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In order for a society to survive,
the poor must execute preventative population checks so the food supply will be
sustained. Population checks are necessary because a population grows
exponentially while food grows linearly; therefore the population needs to be controlled
for there to be enough food. There are two kinds of population checks,
preventative and positive. Preventative checks are controllable impacts on
population, such as a limited number of children per family, while positive
checks are uncontrollable events, for example, a hurricane or a flood. Malthus
suggests that without preventative checks a poor family will be in a worse
state with more children, because the amount of money being brought in will be
spread over more people. In addition to limiting the number of children in a
family, Malthus says that men should be with one woman to help control the
population. Without these checks families will run out of necessary resources,
such as money and food, which will create a larger poor population. Even though
population checks prevent and destroy life, they are needed to conserve the
well being of the masses. For these reasons Malthus argues that the poor must
put financial needs above having children to maintain their resources, and avoid
poverty.
Nice job Graham, I thought you were specific and detailed in your paragraph. I do think your concluding sentence could be stronger though.
ReplyDeleteThanks, i will work on it.
DeleteVery strong paragraph with good points, that could but strung together in a clearer way.
ReplyDeleteYour mention of the population growth being exponential versus the food supply growth being linear is effective. However, I would reword the sentence "...the amount of money being brought in will be spread over more people." because it is slightly confusing.
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