Malthus on population:
Although the poor lack the
self-restraint of the rich to reproduce beyond the population that the food
supply can support, the population must be must be governed in order to supply
the demands of the rest of the population through both preventative and positive
population checks. The human population must be kept in balance with the supply
of food in order to keep people from going hungry. However, the increasing
population is surpassing the food supply. Therefore, positive checks and
preventative checks must occur in order to shrink the size of the population.
Positive checks are natural events that happen and keep the population low.
Examples of these population checks are poverty, disease, famine, and wars.
Events such as those keep the population from surpassing the food supply of the
human race. Preventative checks are population checks done by someone limiting
the size of their family to the amount of people they can afford to support.
Living beyond ones means is a reason for over population and must be stopped
through a simple thought process of calculating the amount of children one can
support. Through these checks, mankind will be able to balance out the
population that the poor cannot keep down.
Good paragraph megglessss. I think that you did a good job of keeping the evidence and analysis clear and accurate but I get a little lost in the thesis/topic sentence. I think that it would be a good idea if you made it more clear to the reader what Malthus' main argument where in your thesis now I am getting a mix of ideas.Goodjob!
ReplyDeleteThanks jmanes, I'll try and make my thesis more concise so its clearer and easier to understand!
DeleteGreat job Meggie. I think you did a great job at taking a side on the argument and truly reflecting what Malthus (allegedly) is thinking. However, i think that many of your sentences were just pieces of evidence with less analysis than would have made this great essay into an awesome essay.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the advise Tyler! I never thought of that, so thank you for pointing that out. I will work on that tonight!
DeleteNice paragraph Meggie! I like your evidence and analysis, but you might want to re-word your thesis, i got a little lost reading it. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Tatinana! I will definitely work on that, thanks for the help!
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