Friday, September 14, 2012

     Although the population increase improves the labor force, Malthus criticizes the lower class for reproducing beyond their limits and insists upon positive and preventative checks in order to create and balance between population and food. In the early 1800’s, England was becoming over populated and could not support its population with the amount of food resources it had. The large population helped to increase the size of the labor force, but at the same time, the large population outgrew the food sources. Thomas R. Malthus proposed that a series of positive checks be used, such as, “sever labor and exposure to the seasons, extreme poverty, bad nursing of children, great towns, excesses of all kinds, the whole train of common diseases and epidemics, wars, plague, and famine”. All these positive checks are checks on the population number. When England becomes too crowded, these positive checks will wipe out those who do not have the resources to protect themselves. Essentially, these checks wipe out many of the lower class. Malthus also proposes preventative checks on the lower class as well. These checks include the lower class looking at large families and checking with themselves if they want to have to divide all their earnings among seven or eight, as opposed to one. These checks also are supposed to help to control the lower class, and prevent them from repopulating. Malthus believed that the over population was good for the work force, but a severe blow to the food supply.      

5 comments:

  1. I like how you thought about the fact that more people can produce more labor. I also liked the background information given that puts everything into perspective. I think you could go into a little bit more detail on how Malthus felt about the poor, for example saying they brought it upon themselves and that people shouldn't help them.

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  2. I liked how you got your point across in you thesis statement. I also liked the way you set your paragraph up where you talked about the checks and then how they would affect the lower class.

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  3. i like how you mentioned that although more people can seem better, in englands case, it was becoming a problem. maybe you could mention how its nature to reproduce and what that means for the poor uneducated people.

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  4. I liked how you used the quotes in your paragraph. They really helped make your evidence stronger

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  5. you introduced your quote very nicely, you have a lot of very good detail on positive and preventative checks. maybe you can add more on Malthus opinion over the poor and how he felt about them :)

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