Although food well sustain a growing population for a
limited period of time, Malthus believes that the idea of checks, such as
famine and disease will allow for a much longer period of sustained population.
Malthus stated in the reading, the idea of being human is the demand for food,
and the reproduction of life. Malthus believes a growing population is not a
bad thing however he is worried that a rapid growth of population well result
in total destruction. Too much reproduction well outgrows the food supply and
humans need food to reproduce. As stated throughout stanza 3, 4 and 5 from the
excerpt, Malthus creates a fairly simple idea that creates great controversy
among the poor and the rich. The preventive and the positive checks concludes
that Malthus suggest that if you cannot afford a child, then don’t
have it. However, if you do in fact want to have a child, be responsible then
save up enough money to raise them properly. The problem Malthus see’s
is that the poor, which makes up the majority of the social class, are not taking
responsibility for their mistakes, and ultimately creating tension between the
wealthy and fortuneless.
Well written tyler, but be careful of your grammar and make sure to indent the first line.
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ReplyDeleteGreat Job on the paragraph! there are some typo's where instead of "will" you accidentally typed "well." Also there are some grammar mistakes that include using parenthetical commas around the phrase "such as famine and disease," the sentence would be "Although food will sustain a growing population for a limited period of time, Malthus believes that the idea of checks, such as famine and disease, will allow for a much longer period of sustained population." I really like where you are going with the lower class not being smart with their money and overproducing when unnecessary. Overall great job.
-Michael
yee mike
DeleteVEry well written tyler. Although there are a few grammatical errors the positives outways the negatives. Good use of combineing evidence and analysis.
ReplyDeleteyou have some typos but its a good paragraph and you also need better evidence that relates to your thesis. bravo well done
ReplyDeleteGreat paragraph, Tyler. You do have some grammar errors and i think think you could explain Mathus' ideas a little bit better.
ReplyDeleteHelllo Everybody, besides stating the easy to fix grammatical errors, is there anything I can do to improve on the paragraph. Add tension, evidence? Thanks for the help y'all
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