Malthus Paragraph
Population checks must be implemented in
order to sustain a society that cannot outgrow its food supply and issues
regarding insufficient amounts of food and poverty is ones own problems. Malthus states, "by law of our nature which makes necessary to the
life of man, the effects of these unequal powers must be kept equal."
Since these powers must be kept equal, Malthus believes that the
population must stay lower than the food supply so everyone has enough food.
To keep the population balanced, Malthus states that, "This implies
a strong and constantly operating check on population from the difficulty of
subsistence." This implies that when people have little food to get
by the population will be checked to prevent over population and without this
the population would exceed the food supply. Malthus then states that if
people suffer from a lack of food then it is their fault. He believes
that it is their fault for having too many children when they cannot afford
them. He says "Man cannot look around him and see the distress which
frequently presses upon those who have large families." What he is
saying is that if man could see the hardship people with large families endure
because they have too little food, then they would have smaller families, thus
keeping the population in check.
great use of quotes from the reading. Try to add more analysis to relate back to the thesis with each quote.
ReplyDeleteSolid paragraph, nice job being specific. Clean up the formatting.
ReplyDeleteYour quotes are effectively placed and provide good introductions to your/Malthus' analysis. However, I would avoid phrases such as "over population" and "What he is saying".
ReplyDeletethanks for the advice, reading it over it does sound a bit repetitive
DeleteI like the paragraph overall, but I believe you can strengthen your point by adding in the detail that the population is growing faster at a exponential rate.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of evidence and analysis. Maybe add a closing sentence, otherwise the paragraph is really good.
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